Hello with all, I begin a news map for Day of Defeat Source...
In short here the screens, I await the first criticisms :)

Screen 1 (http://syrus.mappeur.free.fr/img_maps/En_cours_Campazzo/wip/dod_campazzo001.jpg)
Screen 2 (http://syrus.mappeur.free.fr/img_maps/En_cours_Campazzo/wip/dod_campazzo002.jpg)
Screen 3 (http://syrus.mappeur.free.fr/img_maps/En_cours_Campazzo/wip/dod_campazzo003.jpg)
Screen 4 (http://syrus.mappeur.free.fr/img_maps/En_cours_Campazzo/wip/dod_campazzo004.jpg)
Screen 5 (http://syrus.mappeur.free.fr/img_maps/En_cours_Campazzo/wip/dod_campazzo005.jpg)
Screen 6 (http://syrus.mappeur.free.fr/img_maps/En_cours_Campazzo/wip/dod_campazzo006.jpg)
Screen 7 (http://syrus.mappeur.free.fr/img_maps/En_cours_Campazzo/wip/dod_campazzo007.jpg)
Screen 8 (http://syrus.mappeur.free.fr/img_maps/En_cours_Campazzo/wip/dod_campazzo008.jpg)
Screen 9 (http://syrus.mappeur.free.fr/img_maps/En_cours_Campazzo/wip/dod_campazzo009.jpg)
Screen 10 (http://syrus.mappeur.free.fr/img_maps/En_cours_Campazzo/wip/dod_campazzo010.jpg)

Thank you :)

I didn't understand your post at all, but your map looks good, although it needs more detail, some parts just feel empty.

looks good for a WIP. I'm sure it will look a lot better when its done.

The one thing that really needs to be fixed is the broken window frame thats too close to the topof the hole in the wall.

Looks nice so far... looking at the screens it seems there are only two flags... maybe not enough if it's the case...

looks pretty good.

for those of you who dont understand what he is saying:
he is making a new dods map, here are the screens, and im looking forward to helpful critism.

Ca regarde bon

Thank all for these first comments! The map is not finished, for the moment there is two flags, but It will have more flags...sure!
Thank you for these first criticisms!

PS : Sorry for my poor english... :D

In screen shot 3 dont panel the side of the stairs, architechurally it wouldnt be done like that

Maybe texture it with a wood slat texture over the whole side or allow the wallpaper to come all the way down.

Looking good though, keep it up

MOROESS!!!! :-)

Nice map...

Nice looking !!

Although it reminds of anzio/avalanche a lot.


:)

cool looking map :cool:
it's got a salerno feel.
release it!

btw architechurally, you can have wood panels for the side of the stair, it's called a spandral frame, i've made them :D

tho' you you'd need a custom tex to make it look realistic and it needs to cover the whole side of the stair.

I think the map itself look great...the first few screenies look alot like anzio a bit...maybe you can add some different colored buildings?

In terms of buiding size relations and large details it looks great... for a work in progress even. Test through the gameplay a bit and add some personality and I think the map would be great.

Hi all, here are news screens before the first public beta ;)
Hope you like this!

http://syrus.mappeur.free.fr/img_maps/En_cours_Campazzo/wip/dod_campazzo_incl0021.jpg
http://syrus.mappeur.free.fr/img_maps/En_cours_Campazzo/wip/dod_campazzo_incl0027.jpg
http://syrus.mappeur.free.fr/img_maps/En_cours_Campazzo/wip/dod_campazzo_26_070001.jpg
http://syrus.mappeur.free.fr/img_maps/En_cours_Campazzo/wip/dod_campazzo_26_070004.jpg
http://syrus.mappeur.free.fr/img_maps/En_cours_Campazzo/wip/dod_campazzo_test0004.jpg
http://syrus.mappeur.free.fr/img_maps/En_cours_Campazzo/wip/dod_campazzo_test0018.jpg

http://syrus.mappeur.free.fr/img_maps/En_cours_Campazzo/wip/dod_campazzo_pre00.jpg
http://syrus.mappeur.free.fr/img_maps/En_cours_Campazzo/wip/dod_campazzo_pre01.jpg
http://syrus.mappeur.free.fr/img_maps/En_cours_Campazzo/wip/dod_campazzo_pre02.jpg
http://syrus.mappeur.free.fr/img_maps/En_cours_Campazzo/wip/dod_campazzo_pre03.jpg
http://syrus.mappeur.free.fr/img_maps/En_cours_Campazzo/wip/dod_campazzo_b102.jpg
http://syrus.mappeur.free.fr/img_maps/En_cours_Campazzo/wip/dod_campazzo_b103.jpg
http://syrus.mappeur.free.fr/img_maps/En_cours_Campazzo/wip/dod_campazzo_b104.jpg
http://syrus.mappeur.free.fr/img_maps/En_cours_Campazzo/wip/dod_campazzo_b107.jpg

http://syrus.mappeur.free.fr/img_maps/En_cours_Campazzo/wip/dod_campazzo_b1001.jpg
http://syrus.mappeur.free.fr/img_maps/En_cours_Campazzo/wip/dod_campazzo_b1002.jpg
http://syrus.mappeur.free.fr/img_maps/En_cours_Campazzo/wip/dod_campazzo_b1003.jpg
http://syrus.mappeur.free.fr/img_maps/En_cours_Campazzo/wip/dod_campazzo_b1004.jpg
http://syrus.mappeur.free.fr/img_maps/En_cours_Campazzo/wip/dod_campazzo_b1005.jpg
http://syrus.mappeur.free.fr/img_maps/En_cours_Campazzo/wip/dod_campazzo_b1006.jpg
http://syrus.mappeur.free.fr/img_maps/En_cours_Campazzo/wip/dod_campazzo_b1007.jpg
http://syrus.mappeur.free.fr/img_maps/En_cours_Campazzo/wip/dod_campazzo_b1008.jpg

whoa your map is looking goood. tho there is a little too many fog, im not sure about this but did u used any models from anzio and salerno maps, cuz i remenber some or the sites in your map. well keep up the good work. looking good. can wait for the beta preview.

I really like the level of the fog, support it will add a new angle to gameplay in trying to stay alert and what comes out of the fog. Looks pretty tops!

Looking Good !

Small thing, the last picture, the door trim looks odd being stone, other than that, looks good.

I think the fog level is excellent. It corresponds very well with the large size of the lightglow entities. Hard to judge, but the map maybe could use some more architextural detail... which wouldn't prevent it from being fun or anything. Exciting... :hamster:

Map looks awesome, cant wait to paly this. Fog makes it look way differnt from other maps more of an autum/fall feel to this map whihc i like :D

the map looks very intriguing :cool: looking forward to checking it out someday

hehe Thanks all!
Well here is the link to download the first beta!!
Hope you like it!!

Just clik here (http://membres.lycos.fr/darkstar15/home.php)

Nice Map !

You will get more downloads if you post the beta in the Release Forum (http://dayofdefeat.net/forums/forumdisplay.php?s=&forumid=73)

:)

Thanks! :) I do that! Thanks!! :p

My I also suggest posting at http://www.dod-federation.com/. It's a site setup for DOD:S mappers. I'm sure, if you are interested they would also help you with a play test.