Hey guys, i´ve some new screenshots of my unnamed map for you! Please post waht do you think of them! The metal tower that you can see on pic 12 will become a model by floMatic so that i can reduce the final r_speeds!! - and btw it looks much beteter than my brush construciton I think! :P

so here are the pics:

http://dod.daddeltreff.de/gfx/news/train371.jpg
http://dod.daddeltreff.de/gfx/news/train372.jpg
http://dod.daddeltreff.de/gfx/news/train373.jpg
http://dod.daddeltreff.de/gfx/news/train374.jpg
http://dod.daddeltreff.de/gfx/news/train375.jpg
http://dod.daddeltreff.de/gfx/news/train376.jpg
http://dod.daddeltreff.de/gfx/news/train377.jpg
http://dod.daddeltreff.de/gfx/news/train378.jpg
http://dod.daddeltreff.de/gfx/news/train379.jpg
http://dod.daddeltreff.de/gfx/news/train3710.jpg
http://dod.daddeltreff.de/gfx/news/train3711.jpg
http://dod.daddeltreff.de/gfx/news/train3712.jpg

check out www.kraut-mapworks.de for release infos! ;)

So and now i need a name for this map, it constains of two part, the first is the outside mine part and the second is an industrial part!

Please post your name ideas here!!!!! :)

dod_mine
dod_pit

Thats all I can think of, good map btw. :)

How about dod_koln_day :rolleyes: or dod_railyard

Looks good! but that air vent needs some support, like a pilar holding it up.

looks good,


and i like dod_mine

dod_railyard ?

Originally posted by NC17
How about dod_koln_day :rolleyes: my first thoughts lol..nice map.

Overall, nice work. Some comments though:

-- train372: What's that box on the left, and what is holding it up?
-- train373: That's gotta be the shortest railway carriage I've ever seen! This needs to be at least three times as long, or you should chang it to only two axles (ie. four wheels).
-- train374&375: Again, what on earth is keeping that air vent up? And what's that piece of Black Mesa doing there anyway? If you can, use an "older-looking" texture, you know with some rust on it and such. I mean, it's not like the rest of the premises are in so great shape! ;)
-- train376: I like these silos, but is the texture not scaled too much? I think it looks kinda fuzzy. And are the two on the right hovering?
-- train377: All this area needs is the sound of scurrying rats. Or perhaps some leaves or a torn newspaper on the ground?
-- train378: Are those two lines of track supposed to meet at a rubble pile? I can't make it out, but it looks kinda weird. Sorry.
-- train3711: same grievance as with the silos, this box looks fuzzy. That, and there's a small alignment glitch on that top edge reinforcement.
-- train3712: My first impression is that the rig here looks like Lego, but I can see it's supposed to be riveted steel. Try to use different diameters on the rods, and see if you can tilt the texture on the not-very-vertical legs of it. The rails in this pic are much better than in 378.

Oh dear, what a lot that was. I'm really not trying to diss you, your pics are nice; it's just that the map seems to need a bit more work.

:) Keep it up!

btw it´s i haven´t orient by dod_koln :cool:

dod_mine is a quite good name but i doesn´t fit to this map ;)

more please :D

dod_industrial


It looks great.

Dod_station?

Nice map, looks interesting :)

dod_zug
dod_bergmine
dod_mine
dod_zugfabrik
dod_trainfabrik
dod_salerno
dod_Taman
dod_Tripolis
dod_Unternehmen_Zug
dod_Volkssturm
dod_Coutances
dod_Kazan
dod_Xanten

:-) thats all

dod_industrial sounds good, but i think i heard it before, is there a map named like that???

thx to all - more please! :D

dod_mantrain

^^ winr!


Nice map btw :D

dod_yards

dod_industrial

dod_docs

do you wanna have brits and axis oder allies and axis in this map?? :confused:

i like dod_station, besides that, looks pretty good.

really good map, love the textures, and the lighting (even though I dont think the sky fits. I like dod_mine

American I say.
dod_zerstörtenzug
dod_schutt
dod_wrackteile
dod_bildensizuhölleaus:D

That's all I can come up with.

A few tips.

1. Make the name short and to the point
2. make the name english

Otherwise, it would just get buried amidst other maps.

And I have not heard of a dod_industrial, so you should be able to use it without a problem. If it was used, it's not a current DoD map, or a widespread old one.

Nice start, but yer wall textures are almost the same, a bit brownish...add more variation.

http://dod.daddeltreff.de/gfx/news/train375.jpg

Maybe u can look it has just been bombed...crates, smoke fire...debry etc.

Bombed out maps are kinda cliche - I'd rather have a map set in a scene without massive rubble and smoky ruins - I think we've all seen enough of that...an intact locale would be nice for a change. You know....not everything was plastered by B-25's in WW2. :D

Originally posted by TheHunter
Hey guys, i´ve some new screenshots of my unnamed map for you! Please post waht do you think of them! The metal tower that you can see on pic 12 will become a model by floMatic so that i can reduce the final r_speeds!! - and btw it looks much beteter than my brush construciton I think! :P

so here are the pics:

http://dod.daddeltreff.de/gfx/news/train371.jpg
http://dod.daddeltreff.de/gfx/news/train372.jpg
http://dod.daddeltreff.de/gfx/news/train373.jpg
http://dod.daddeltreff.de/gfx/news/train374.jpg
http://dod.daddeltreff.de/gfx/news/train375.jpg
http://dod.daddeltreff.de/gfx/news/train376.jpg
http://dod.daddeltreff.de/gfx/news/train377.jpg
http://dod.daddeltreff.de/gfx/news/train378.jpg
http://dod.daddeltreff.de/gfx/news/train379.jpg
http://dod.daddeltreff.de/gfx/news/train3710.jpg
http://dod.daddeltreff.de/gfx/news/train3711.jpg
http://dod.daddeltreff.de/gfx/news/train3712.jpg

check out www.kraut-mapworks.de for release infos! ;)

So and now i need a name for this map, it constains of two part, the first is the outside mine part and the second is an industrial part!

Please post your name ideas here!!!!! :) dod_wasteland

I just noticed some of the same from previous posts. Although, I do like the sky. It gives the map a kind of gloomy dusk in the middle of nowhere feeling.

yes sky looks good, but i think it dosen´t fit to this map - but i found no better ones! :(

more names please :D

Originally posted by TheHunter
yes sky looks good, but i think it dosen´t fit to this map - but i found no better ones! :(

more names please :D dod_wasteland

Originally posted by Lonewolf_45100
Bombed out maps are kinda cliche - I'd rather have a map set in a scene without massive rubble and smoky ruins - I think we've all seen enough of that...an intact locale would be nice for a change. You know....not everything was plastered by B-25's in WW2. :D

I was thinking about doing a map like this, except during the fighting the city starts being destroyed either by artillery or bombs from planes. I doubt its even possible.

And industrial sounds like a good name.

Originally posted by Die Schlampfe
I was thinking about doing a map like this, except during the fighting the city starts being destroyed either by artillery or bombs from planes. I doubt its even possible.

And industrial sounds like a good name. what about dod_wasteland?

wasteland sounds not bad, but like a fun map for example like legoland!

I think I´ll choose dod_industrial! - very hot name i think :D

and you will play axis vs. brits! ;)

Originally posted by TheHunter
wasteland sounds not bad, but like a fun map for example like legoland!

I think I´ll choose dod_industrial! - very hot name i think :D

and you will play axis vs. brits! ;)


Sweet,

If you need a tester, drop me a line.

how about dod_nomane :D