[wip:model]mp40


JoJo
09-06-2003, 04:34 AM
OK, this is my very first model, after seeing Marksman's tutorial I thought I would try and make a full MP40 (brilliant jump mate, I made it into a page long tutorial HERE (http://www.jojosplace.net/DoD/marksman/marksman.htm).

Its obviously not finished yet, infact I really only started it yesterday, I just want to opinions on it now...

*EDIT*

New pics up now:

PICTURE 1 (http://www.jojosplace.net/DoD/models/jojosmp40.jpg)

PICTURE 2 (http://www.jojosplace.net/DoD/models/jojosmp40b.jpg)

PICTURE 3 (http://www.jojosplace.net/DoD/models/jojosmp40c.jpg)

Rotkopf
09-06-2003, 04:38 AM
Not bad. Just one minor issue : The metal parts at the magazine feed-in could be textured instead of modelled - would save some polys.

Landser
09-06-2003, 04:40 AM
Looks very good so far. If the textures will be as good as the model I will be happy.

JoJo
09-06-2003, 04:41 AM
I was thinking of a ultra-high poly and low poly models.... but yes I do see your point, thanks!

09-06-2003, 08:43 AM
Learn to properly smooth things with MAX. You could round off the magazine a bit, and you went a little overboard on the body of the gun. Try and redo the body using less faces.

JoJo
09-06-2003, 09:38 AM
The mag was just stuck there to see what it would look like, and Im going to make a high poly version (cos I like lots of model detail) and a low poly one (so i need to skin it properly), thanks for the info.

FIGUUR
09-06-2003, 11:44 AM
for a first model, it looks very good.

On a side-note, the bolt shouldn't be that much up, it should be more on the side (you can see it in on the MP40 in my sig..)


here are a few better ref pics than my sig :rolleyes:

http://guns.connect.fi/rs/mp40.jpg

http://hot.ee/commandosweb/images/relvad/MP40.jpg

http://www.fightdirector.com/mp40-1.JPG

hoped those helped...

JoJo
09-06-2003, 11:50 AM
Thank you very much kind sir!

Ska Wars
09-06-2003, 12:31 PM
Looks bloody great mate, so far all i can make of an mp40 is the barrel in the tut lol

Keep it up,

Ska

AFG
09-06-2003, 12:55 PM
aw... no MP40 stock?

JoJo
09-06-2003, 01:13 PM
Yeah after I finished the tut I knida thought 'thats a small mp40' after looking at a few pics I realised that it wasn't finished :eek: ... so erm... there you go!

LOL there will be a fold-over stock, used by Fallschrimjaeger. I'm just lazy and ain't done it yet :D .

JoJo
09-07-2003, 03:59 PM
Here are the latest, the stock rest needs to be reshaped I think, and there are so many polys it's really uite silly, I got a bit carried away :eek:

PICTURE 1 (http://www.jojosplace.net/DoD/models/jojosmp401a.jpg)

PICTURE 2 (http://www.jojosplace.net/DoD/models/jojosmp401b.jpg)

PICTURE 3 (http://www.jojosplace.net/DoD/models/jojosmp401c.jpg)

Comments welcome!

Ska Wars
09-07-2003, 04:27 PM
Great work mate, better than i could ever do.

Ska

JoJo
09-07-2003, 04:30 PM
Originally posted by Ska_Wars
Great work mate, better than i could ever do.

Ska LIES! We all know you l33t! Thanks m8!

[AGM]# R0MM3L #
09-07-2003, 05:06 PM
/me want you release it soon :D

Howitzer
09-07-2003, 06:42 PM
Looking good:D Wouldn't mind another weapon model of the mp40 to spray you with as well JoJo:p

JoJo
09-08-2003, 05:55 AM
Originally posted by Howitzer
Looking good:D Wouldn't mind another weapon model of the mp40 to spray you with as well JoJo:p /kicks Howitzer in the goolies, runs away giggling :eek:

Anyway, wait till you kind out the poly count.... it was 11000 (yes eleven thousand) and now it's only 7000... yeah... only

Obviously 1/2 of the poly can go (as you'll never see them in the game) but it's still a hell-of-a-lot of polys ! :mad:

JoJo
09-09-2003, 04:48 AM
Im handing this over to anyone who wants to try and finish it (Ska Wars might look at it). The polys are high and I want to work on something a bit different...

a Lewis Mark 1 :D !

If anyone wants to have a go PM me or email me at mail@jojosplace.net or jojo@dodsupply.co.uk (prolly both then I really deff get it).

I'll keep looking at this obviously, but I really want to do that lewis!

Marksman
09-12-2003, 09:10 PM
Better than I could ever do. ;)

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